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that song

A familiar tune they play
I stand alone in the park
And as they wind down,
I toss them a stray coin.

Lost memories afloat
Do I still remember his face?
Thinking back to the past
Hurts...

The leaves rustle as I walk
Passers-by ignore my song
The footpath I walk everyday
Seems so strange now

Would he have remembered
the sad face in the crowd?
Memories fade away
but my tears still fall...

The concert hall is silent
The seats are devoid of people
But I put down my grocery bag
And walk towards the piano

As I sat down on the stage
I remember the tune you used
to hum... to play... to sing...
My fingers are awkward,
they fumble on the hard parts
the wrong notes echo in the hall

Then your hands take over...
And our song plays again.

chiiyo's comments :
I wrote this recently. I was extremely inspired by the style of lyrics found in Spiral's Kakuteru, which had lines chock full of very commonplace meanings, but still ended up very meaningful. I tried to emulate it, but I think I failed. Even so, I like the feel of this song. It's meant to be sung without a chorus, but verses 1, 3 and 5 share the same tune, as do verses 2 and 4, with the whole tune building up to a crescendo in verses 6 and 7. I might translate this to japanese one day too, when I am proficient enough myself. The meaning is kind of slippery even to myself, but it's mostly about a girl who remembers her boyfriend when she hears this song being played in the park. I can't figure out whether the boyfriend is supposed to be dead or not, but it's mostly a song about loss, and about remembering and honouring that loss.



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