"I accept." His voice was soft. "There will be no turning back." She tightened their embrace. "I know." The candlelight flickered, sending shadows across the room. He sat her up, wiping the blood from her neck. "Are you alright?" "Wonderful," she smiled, licking the last of his blood away. (49 words)
"Not even in death would we part." The candlelight flickered, sending shadows across the room. The lifeless body jerked back to life, licking her bloody lips. He fondled her face, even as she bared her own little fangs. "You will remain my wife, forever." She smiled. "Yes... forever..." (48 words)
chiiyo's comments :
This was actually an assignment from our english teacher, to make our own mini-sagas. I tried very very hard to create this vampire thing with mine, which is the first one, and it was well-received in class, although it had to be read twice before some people could understand the meaning behind it. When I tried to edit it, I got the second one, which was vastly different form the first one, as you might have noticed. To be honest, I'm not very good at this. Some of the other mini-sagas by my friends were a lot better. To think I call myself a writer... *shakes head*